JorNcar's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Luis vs. ClockCrew]

yay!

I couldnt way to see it :)

amazing... as usual

[Draw a Samurai]

uhhh

u'd ared retarted....

seriously... why would you submit a picture to the portal???

which also let me add... SUCKED

[Zelda: Heroic Rage 8]

errors....

1st of all... let me say it was a decent movie

but as I was watching it, I saw A LOT of flaws.. it seems you have a lot of difficulty with hands. At many times, I saw hands with innacurate fingers, missing fingers, or looking deformed. things like that just bug me.

Also, link himself looked pretty good, but everything else looked pitiful. Almost as if you traced the link clips for anothner source. and then made everything else yourself and took credit for it. That could be why the body of link was so perfected, but the face of him was disgusting. (You would have to erase what ever facial features were there and put in your own) It makes it almost look ripped off, or stolen. (not saying it is though)

Lastly, the plot has major holes in it, and is kinda cheesy. you first see link looking at the graves. then you see him kill people. Then you see some guy say "RAPE AND KILL THE GIRL IN THE NAME OF GANON" (very cheesy line.........) then all of the sudden link appears????????? then she rests herself on his shoulder... then hes at ganons castle?????????????? wtf just happened.

you story jumps sooooo much with out letting the viewer understand whats happening.

if you touch up your artwork (a lot!!!!.... including making you art all look like it was traced... and work on the actual realisticness of it, like the fingers), and fix the plot holes... your looking on a real hit. (this is a hit, but i mean like top 50)

oh also... link looks gay while running

[The Arena Part 1]

it looks like a first draft

This movie could have great potential... but it looks like a first draft.... kind of like you winged the movie... didnt look over it, and submitted it.

Congrats on front page, but now you might you might want to go back and look over everything

there where are alot of sloppy artwork parts, and A LOT of spelling errors. with some extra fine detail this could have been a 3.9 or >

keep working on these. but spend more time on them.

[The White, The Black]

amazing

just the idea is great.... making a very simple... more or less boring game and turning it into an all out war!!

this was beautiful... and One of my favorite flash movies I have seen

[Hell-Bent]

I liked it

I thought it was good, but there were some downfalls

when you made the joke about the heart failure.... im sure a bunch of people exited out, and voted 0

also there is no plot at all until the very end. If at the beggining you gave a flash back to what happened and why he needed revenge it would have made a lot more sense. And therefore a lot better

good job, keep it up

[TANKMEN]

omg!

FUCKIG GENIUS!!!!!!!

I LOVE YOU

[2 years of animation]

nice...

hey good job, At first i didn't know who made it cause I did check out the auther... But as it went on I was like all... hell yea, "guntherswahn"

love the style, keep making random things :)

LaserKarl responds:

Thanks man!
Yeah, its ol' gunther, tierd of that name now though.

[XIN Session 18 (Finale)]

nice...

good job... I saw this on your website already. I was waiting for it to come out on ng

[WorldWar2]

ehhh

well... im not a big fan of stick movies, but it was enjoyable. great stick animation.

the violence only got 6 because you didn't really show any violence. you made the screen black, or blurred it out a lot. The movie was also way way way to short

it was only like 1and 3/4 of your trailer. (i think... if its the trailer im thinking about) and if it is the trailer im thinking about, i liked the trailer more