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ya-uhhhhh

that was just creepy

it was a great immitation just to..... ehhh... for me

loved it

i loved the style... it seemed a lot like adam phillips, but with your own twist.

the movie was really good and it was a great story...

but may i ask... did you place bity from bitey of brackenwood in the movie? i could of sworn i saw it when the thing came on the top of the car.

Gobi responds:

there are loads of references ;)

good job...

your right... it did start wayyyy to slow

but after i got into it, i thought it was great. i loved the way you made the what i think were aliens, and the whole idea of the story...

i dont have much room on my favorites in ng... but just know i bookmarked this page

good job

good job...

its definately one of the best series on newgrounds...

it would be be cool if you could give each episode a title... it would be like a real show... (its that good)

subcultured2 responds:

great idea!

well... you gotten a little worse

I usually give the dailly toons all 10's becuase the usually get better everytime, (kinda like an encouragement thing) but this time it has gotten worse... If you spent just a little more time creating more quality it could be much better. Keep trying to get better and good luck

still crap!

wow daillytoons are still crap... but I have to give you props! there getting 10 times better then they were before.

thats were the 10's commin. due the mass improvement of the daily toons you get 10's (still didn't like the movie (other then the intro, that was cool) keep working on it)

read below.

well the fbf movement was good, but if was nothing new. This movie was just a line moving around, it didnt really show any skill, style or creativity. Becuase this movie was (not to be mean) a peice of crap i gave it a 2 becuase it was done better then most of the ones like this I have seen.
My peice of adive is, though this movie will stay on newgrounds, its not any acomplishment you should put your talent into a good movie with a good plot, and actual animations (not lines). Trust me I once did exactly what you did. I think you have good potential to become really good so good luck.

theY4Kman responds:

Thank you for the encouragement! I want to do at least one more dot and line FBF, then I'm going to stick-fig FBF. (You've seen this FBF, think of stick figures!) I'll get at least a 3.00! Well, I hope...

are you serious

ok... im going to try and be as nice as possible

first of all.. How do you think a bunch of lines can be an entertaining movie...

second of all.. what was the point of the dam movie

thrid of all.. are you retarted to make a movie over a minute long of just a bunch of colored lines moving back and forth and spinning

4th of all.. thats hardly fbf... you just moved a line that takes no skill what so ever

5th of all.. are you retarted?

6th of all.. what was the plot.. the point... the meaning.. the story.. or anything other thing that movie didnt have (shouldnt even call it a movie)

7th of all.. why would you make a movie only to get it onto newgrounds... that almost takes out the whole reason about making movies... you should never try and promote your score durring your movie... and you did it like 3 times saying vote 5 (which makes me think you made the movie just to get a movie on newgrounds)

8th of all... are you retarted

9th and last of all... why would you make a flash about lines moving around to bad music... ( the movie also was horrible... if you have to make lines moving.. make it good)

last comment .. if your going to continue to make movies like that... just quit flash.. cause it was horrible!

n00b-l0s3r responds:

1. They add variety to a movie

2. It is for stress relief.

3. You're the retard and you can't even spell retarded!

4. Go see the other FBF movies. THey all use frame by frame. Trust me, too much tweening sucks.

5. You are retarded. I'm not.

6. LOOK AT THE TITLE, IT'S RANDOMNESS!!!

7. Who cares? At least I didn't make a 2 frame looping HIGH FRAME RATE movie that seizure blinks: "OGMF T3H PWNZ4GE VOT3 F1F3N-ZR0DDD 0R J0R N00B F4GGH0T!1E!11ONR!1Oneo!!O!!1OEN!1".

8. By Satan's dog fuck ass you asked me that already!

9. I like it. If you don't like it, that's yours to figure out.

Last comment reply: GET OFF MY INTERNET!!!

let me see.... a copy?

the movie was decent... just good enough to stay in the portal?

but as I was watching the plot seemed very framiliar.... ever hear of grand theft auto: vice city....
the plot is exactly the same as the beginning movie.... I think you even stole some lines...
and for that i call you a thief ass bitch...

try and be more original... with a original plot and a little better graphics you could have pretty good movie....

Good Movie....

it was an enjoyable movie
there were a few things bad with it that i think you can touch up....
on most of your tweens it seemed kind of blocky if you know what i mean.... if you use a motion guide it will made the thing go in whatever path you want smoothly. So on the sun earth thing the earth can actually look like its spinning around the sun.

Another thing is the white guy is very badly draw.. and when i very I mean very!!! give it some detail actualy give it arms and such... other then that you could be look at a good 2.8>>> if you fix it...

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